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dinesh's avatar

Thanks for the story, Paul. The story, in a way, reminded me of "The Yellow Wallpaper," as the husband/doctor don't believe the wife.

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Terry Brennan's avatar

I’ve little experience of stories with a supernatural dimension but there was a lot to enjoy here. The developing tension, the recurring use of the motifs introduced in the opening sentence to help achieve that tension. The growing anxiety of the mother, shown against the measured attitudes of the husband and the doctor, allows space for the reader to speculate about what is amiss. It’s a sad story and one with only partial resolution, a strength in a story of this length where there needs to be a measure of uncertainty to give the story depth. Thanks for sharing and for inviting engagement with it. I’m expecting other readers will have different takes. Be good to hear what those are…

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